I had worked on this in bits and pieces in the past but it never quite came together. Ah, what a little challenge can do. MP3 to be added shortly. Thanks in advance for any comments!
GUATEMALAN PRINCESS
Gently, haunting, softly knocking
At the doors of my resistance
You came to me and introduced yourself
A self proclaimed Guatemalan princess
Telling me the secrets of your soul
Telling me what others didn't know
Listening when I told you of my fears
Holding me when I broke into tears
We were together and lost
by no one's insistence
in the catacombs
of a metaphysical existence
Did I dream you or were you real
was there something concealed
is this life in which we met
One we live in or forget
You who were so innocent
and me one so corrupt
are we meant to be together
or does it end when I wake up
We were together and lost
by no one's insistence
in the catacombs
of a metaphysical existence
Where are you now where did you go
Will I be with you again
Only you in my memory
Touch me now as you did then
So I pray hoping your eyes are still
Sparkling and reflective
Your smile still true to you soul
a self proclaimed Guatemalan princess
We were together and lost
by no one's insistence
in the catacombs
of a metaphysical existence
Gently, haunting, softly knocking
At the doors of my resistance
You came to me and introduced yourself
But were you real, my Guatemalan princess
Chefie,
Good take on the assignment. I'm having a
hard time with some of the phrasing including
"Guatemalan princess" but will wait for the
MP3 to see how you pull it off.
Keep it up,
John
Hi
I to felt there were a bit of tongue twisting happening , but then again like The Celt said sung could be totally different
Cheers
L.K
Aghhhh
Not only am I a senior citizen
I'm now a bloody senior member
Are you people trying to tell me I'm old or what ?
over 700 posts ( I really do need to get out more )
