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SSG Week 18 - Boy

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(@denim_tonque)
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BOY

He was a boy, just a boy
His touch was golden
and I knew he could fly
You never saw him leave the ground

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And he always wondered why?
How do you know for sure  
How do ya - know for - sure?
(x2)

He was a good boy, just a boy
Trusted with all his might
He played with conviction ev'ry night
With faith it will be alright

chorus
(But he always....)

Now he's a big boy, a star boy
sittin' on top of the world
put your hand in the hand of the man
Everything will go according to plan

chorus
(Still he always.....)

How can you be so sure?


   
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(@denim_tonque)
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Id like to smooth that first verse out a little.
Especially
and I knew he could fly
You never saw him leave the ground

and still express the writers belief in 'the boy', and the protagonists doubt.

Any thoughts??


   
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(@homeboy_hug)
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maybe.. ummm...

he could have jumped from cloud to cloud
but his eyes never left the ground??

stop listening to me


   
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