Here's a chorus thought for David "Peace" Hodge's, People Full of Holes;
people full of holes
let you see right through them
they don't have any substance
and you don't what to do, then
they get in your way
chit chat and supposes
do nothing to help
and play ring around the roses
and you look past the petals
and the thorns are there
you look into their face
and you see they don't care
Neil
Hi Neil
Interesting take here - silly as it may sound, the "looking through" the "people full of holes" never occurred to me! Nice grab, there!
Am I missing something or is there a word missing in this line:
and you don't what to do, then
I was reading it as "...and you don't know what to do, then..." until I realized I was putting in the "know" :wink:
Peace
Hi Neil,
nice take on the title. I really like what you do with the last 1/2 of this chorus using all those "and's" , good job
cheers
Paul
Hi David,
You read it right the first time . . . . . "know" is the missing word . . . . . but you knew that somehow :roll:
and "Thanks" Paul.
Neil
Hi Neil,
I liked all your ideas, but my first impression was that some of it read a bit more like a verse than a chorus. For chorus purposes, the middle part didn't come across as well as the beginnining and end did, for me. It seemed to add length without adding much extra punch. Maybe just the way I was reading it though...
Cheers,
Chris
