This is a silly rap I came up with (my first). It's partly inspired by the film Irma Vep. You will just have to put aside your misgivings and imagine it being sung by a very aggressive person who doesn't care if you think Vime isn't a real word, and will pop a cap in your ass if you try to complain! ;)
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V to the I to the M to the E!
V to the I to the M to the E!
vime vime, rap in time
just a little kiss and i'll make you mine
vime vime, rap in time
just a little kiss baby, uh, yeah
breaking moves on the floor
I just knew that I'd score
I can't hold back no more
but you told me before
that it's not your first time
and it might be a fright
but your neck looks divine
and the blood flows like wine
yo, it's making me weak
at the knees, I can't speak
and the peak of my strength
is returning to me
and I'm starting to feel
and believe it could be
the unrealest degree
of a new kind of me (yeah!)
vime vime, rap in time
just a little kiss and i'll make you mine
vime vime, rap in time
just a little kiss baby, uh, yeah
and I suck you dry
while the promises I
made just turn into lies
and the sun in the sky
burns a hole in my back
as it eats up the black
of the night that I crave
like a bat in a cave
and the love that we made
in the bed that is stained
with the red that was drained
never tasted so great
like the fruit from the tree
that was taken by Eve
a mistake that'd lead
us to sin, d'you believe
vime vime, rap in time
just a little kiss and i'll make you mine
vime vime, rap in time
just a little kiss baby, uh, yeah
did I satisfy you?
did you like what I do?
cutting through to the jugular
see how I tug you'll agree
that a hug wouldn't do
cos a kiss full of blood
is the juice
and the fruit that I need
and you'll come to no harm
rising up from my arms
but the cross in your palm
brings a darker alarm
as I realise my fate
and the hate in your face
puts me back in my place
and I can't go on
I'm dissolving upon
the sheet that you laid
on the bed that was stained
as the sunlight invades
it's the end of an age
and you're lying there drained
it's a tragic mistake
of our bodies entwined
in a fatal embrace
vime vime, rap in time
just a little kiss and i'll make you mine
vime vime, rap in time
just a little kiss baby, uh, yeah
vime vime, rap in time
just a little kiss and i'll make you mine
vime vime, rap in time
just a little kiss baby, uh, yeah
Reading it through again it seems a little shorter than I had imagined. Ah well.
Paul & Peter... who's next? Jesus himself???
I think Mary comes next :D this is a music forum after all.
That's pretty cool. And nice to see something different. I hate rap, but I could so hear this as rap, and it'd probably be a hit.
Joe
Very cool.
Falling in love is like learning to play the guitar; first you learn to follow the rules, then you learn to play with your heart.
Were gonna hear this, right?
"Like the coldest winter chill. Heaven beside you. Hell within." -Jerry Cantrell
Were gonna hear this, right?
only in your dreams my friend, only in your dreams :mrgreen:
Maybe we could take this over to Jam's and both turn this into a song.
Gangster style.
Yo.
"Like the coldest winter chill. Heaven beside you. Hell within." -Jerry Cantrell
Hi Martin
Very clever writing love the lines
cutting through to the jugular
see how I tug you'll agree
and
and the love that we made
in the bed that is stained
with the red that was drained
They're just excellentlines.
Let us know if the jam works out that'd be interesting
Bob :twisted:
You are what you eat, eat well
