Change of scenery - Many of you will be parked right now in front of your PC but for his week move somewhere else - sit in the garden, go for a walk, a drive, go to the pub, drop in and see an old relative or friend but essentially change your environment and see how (or if) it stimulates you to write about something different.
That's pretty much how I always do it. So this week was no different.
You ©2005JKovak
You turn me....
This way, that way
Inside out
I don't understand what
You say
But then it's....
Never 'bout me, it's always
You it's about
Guess I just never learned how
To play
Oh yeah you....
Tell me I don't
Understand
The reason for all the things
You do
But this was....
Just the way you
Had it planned
A life....
That's all about
You
All about you
All about you
In a world that revolves
All around you
The sun never shines
The moon never glows
In a world without you
Love never grows
Oh maybe....
I shouldn't want you
The way that I want you
When I don't understand what
You do or say
And all the....
World just keeps
Spinning 'round you
And I'm....
Just in
The way
'Cause it's all about you
All about you
In a world that revolves
All around you
The sun never shines
The moon never glows
In a world without you
Love never grows
Yeah Baby....
Everyone
Gets you
Or do they just
Yes you
Everyone, everyone
Everyone but me
And I just bet you'd
Make me confess to
Not understanding what
I hear or see
So baby....
I can't want you when
Everyone wants you
And you....
Want everyone
But me
'Cause it's all about you
All about you
In a world that revolves
All around you
The sun never shines
The moon never glows
In a world without you
Love never grows
Oh yeah it's....
All about you you
All about you you
You you
You you
You
Incredible job. I love the way you phrase the conflict between disliking her because of her selfishness but not being able to put aside your feelings for her. Just great stuff
Immature? Of course I'm immature Einstein, I'm 50 and in a Rock and ROll band.
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Hi Joe,
yeah not bad. I get a fairly laid back kind of vibe on this one with those one liners in there. This one I think you should post an mp3 for us :D.
Good work
pbee
I like the one liners, Sounds like a rock song to me, like some one is pissed, building up steam in the verses :twisted: :evil: Then to the chorus where it explodes :!:--the dog
Joe
On first read I was thinking Country, but have to
agree with Dog
That chorus should ROCK
John
John said: That chorus should ROCK
Yep, it does.
Joe
