Y4 WK32 Do you know me ? Complete edited version MP3

Complete version as sung on MP3

For I put on these clothes
Then I put on these shows
You only think you love me
But I'm not these clothes
And its all just for the shows
So how can you really know me

At the end of shows
The curtains will close
And you'll be gone with out me
You will leave me there
On that stage I will stare
At the empty seating

Back in my motel room
In darkness I'm entombed
And those clothes lay on the floor
Feeling naked and bare
Wondering who really cares
And does anyone really love me ?

For I put on these clothes
Then I put on these shows
You only think you love me
But I'm not these clothes
And its all just for the shows
So how can you really know me

Sitting and waiting anticipating
Wondering if you will be there
Walking the back rooms
Nerves over ride my gloom
Cheering and laughter, for I'm on after
That 17 year old kid from there

The roar of the crowd
As they scream out loud
The bright lights , blinds my eyes
I walk to the mic I say alright
Lets get this show on the road
My heart is racing , theres no hesitating

For I put on these clothes
Then I put on these shows
You only think you love me
But I'm not these clothes
And its all just for the shows
So how can you really know me

Do you really love me

Do you really love me

WOW,
that was great, . Your guitar work sounded very convincing, and the singing was more confident as well. Well done. As far as the song goes a little suggestion would be to use a different chord progression for chorus than the verse, even just reversing the order works quite well.
I enjoyed that keep it up

cheers

Paul

Thanks Pbee

I'm too sure about wow though :oops: :oops:

But thanks for the vote in confidence :lol: :lol: :lol:

Hilch,

I'm just catching up on things around here after
being away for a few days. This is good and I'm
glad to see (hear) you still got that Tom Waits thing
working for you.

John

Thanks John

Tom can rest very easily I reckon

Hilch :?:

Thanks Pete

I most definately don't feel more confident , I still think I sound like someone that should never record his voice ..

But hey if the people don't mind my very off key and off pitch singing then hey what hell I'll do it ..

All loss of hearing after listening to me sing is yet to be proved medically :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: