I have to agree with everyone elseA great piece of writing and I REALLY love the bridge.Nothing else to say about it to be honestBeren

Thanks everyoneYour kinder than I deserve for this song I think. I really wrote it purely for the discipline of writing something for the week.I was t...

Hey I like this particularly the way the song changes direction unexpectedly in the chorus.You let us know why she really does like him rather than ju...

I wanted to say Narn that this is a really lovely song.The only thing that caught my attention was in the first verseSpending my last days in bed rail...

Hey don't apologise Bluenight I wasn't criticising you I just didn't want you to get the wrong impression about the meaning of the song.Of course this...

Thanks for your comments everybody. I really find the feedback incredibly helpful and I believe my song writing has been getting a bit better as a res...

Hi MarvI have to agree with everyone else that you have written (another) excellent song. I love the juxtaposition of someone being brutally murdered ...

Hi brother tupeloI love the easy feel and rhythm of this songI bet its a joy to sing but I must confess I haven't a clue who or what it is about.I'd l...

Hi Scratchthanks for another good song. It is a real source of inspiration to me the way in which you take a simple story (a mentally ill man I take i...

Hi blue noteI just wanted to drop you a quick line to say that I actually prefer the first version of this song. I think you have diluted the power of...

Hey Bluethat is a really great effort. I can't believe you didn't even have to try hard for this one. I think this is the best thing I have seen you s...

Thanks Bluenight I really appreciate it when people take the trouble to comment on my work.This song started off as straight autobiography in the firs...

Yeah thanks guysthat last verse bothers me too. I felt a bit like I was filling up space with it without really having anything to say.I think I'll tr...