Thanks Ken,I hadn't ever considered that my song writing might play havoc with astrological truths.Most of my songs are a bit of autobiography, a pinc...

Hi Vic,I'm honestly touched that you remember my comments. Like I say I don't often seem to find the time to post songs but I always enjoy reading eve...

Brilliant song Katreich, it works on so many levels.For a start it practically jumps off the screen and starts singing itself, the internal rhythm is ...

Thanks HilchI've tried it a couple of different ways. A slow acoustic fingerpicked ballad or an upbeat fast-strummed number. Both seem to work. It jus...

Hi ChefieI must admit when I read the first verse I almost stopped reading. I'm so glad I didn't though because the rest of the song is one of the bes...

Hi HilchI like the fact you took a line like blood sweat and tears and turned it into such a sweet song. (and I mean sweet in a positive way. I like t...

Hi StorkyI actually really like this song. First read through I didn't think there was much to it but I read it again and I really liked the chorus. I...

You're right, 'All evening long' sounds alot better.Thanks for the advice.Beren

I like this song. I've always been a sucker for a lyric that captures a hopeful yearning spirit that knows there must be more to life. I get a subtle ...

HII really like this song. It's got a story to tell which I always like and the imagery seems nicely in place.The one place where I got a bit confused...

Hey blue nightThat's a lovely song. Your writing style has got alot more focused since I last dropped by this forum. Your choice of words was great. T...