Good job. I actually thing your chorus is pretty good as it is. The only thing I would suggest is to change "If I could grab hold of these figments of...

Don't hold off posting your songs just b/c few people posted on this one. You've got a great talent and I really like reading the lyrics to your songs...

Simply Amazing. Anyone who reads that knows it was written with feeling and passion. Keep up the great work.

Good Job. I usually dont like it when artists swear in their songs, but I think it fits perfectly here. It really shows how passionate you are abou th...

Thanx guys

Fantastic. I like the message I see. Life can seem unreal at times and we need to distinguish that from our dreams. Keep up the great work!

I like it. It makes you think abou the meaning and it sounds like it could have many. One I can think of is that when you change your lifestyle for so...

Great Song with awsome lyrics. It really relates to all the wars that are happening around the world and makes up really appreciate how lucky we are.

I like it a lot. The only thing I would suggest is to change the line "Ruining your room up,". The alliteration doesnt really seem to work. I would su...

Nice job and pwerful message, life beats ya down, find a way to get back up. The only thing I would say is that this line "Are unknown to me…lost fr...

Good song. I agree with dragona. I would change lust to dwell. Thats just my opinion take it for what you will.

I really like the chorus, but the line "can i have the last word sorry doesnt cut it" doesnt really seem to fit. Thats just my opinion, take it for wh...

I like it, it sounds like it has a really nice rythm. I especially like the ending, which is perfect.

My friends always says the artists that I listen to are untalented, like Good Charlotte and Maroon 5, but I say to him, "Well, they wouldnt be were th...