I agree with you. I'm gonna try to put an arrangement together myself. I'll use your correction in the revised the lyric.

I like the play on words that you use. It's cool, and easy. Something that anybody can pick up.

I feel like i could probably pull off slow tempo rock. I also hear country when looking at this.

I appreciate the comment I still learning I dig heavy metal and like the stuff marty, dimebag, kerry doI haven't had time to really sit down and learn...