it may be a rambling but its a good ramble..but yes an explanation could be in order?

i like the flow of this song...its very unique...when i imagined how it would sound...thats the vibe i got..very original. good job!

hey! i really enjoyed it...it rhymed nicely an i could certainly relate to it..i especially like your first first and i think the chorus compliments t...

yes it really is true...i dont think i could write that if i didnt actually feel it you know what i mean? thanks for your comment! :D

loved this song! i could really relate to it...when you mentioned high school at first i thought it was going to be a bit cheesy and cliche but it rea...

thanks for the comments! its actually a poem its not meant to be a song sorry i should of said!

thank you for your comments! i've just posted a poem in the other forum that i worked quite hard on so please take a look if you can it would be appre...

yeah your right, it's actually quite a sexual thing..well it turned out that way when i wrote it and how people play sexual games with eachother and i...

:twisted: a revenge esque song...i think its good and people can relate to it. some lines felt a little forced but other than that i understood it an...

cool song, quite short but you keep to the assignment i think. One line i didnt understand was this one....'with flames of the lowest feeling high'

hey i dont want you to take this negatively but it sounds like a pop song? am i correct?