wow the second version is a vast improvement on the first! The first one was a little all over the place and hard to follow but you really gaver your ...

Probably one of the best set of lyrics I have ever seen on this website. And thats probably the best comment i have ever recieved! :D

thank you! yeah i think i may be able to use that again...thanks for your comments

The first verse deals with the physical aspect of the song....it stemmed from when i cut myself by accident and i saw the blood over my skin and it in...

oops sorry i didnt mean to put a commar there!! in case noone got the last part..it is about suicide....not having the nerve...as for what you said ab...

really great titles...they are all fantastic :)

the music for this...would be very angry..kinda (i hate to use the word) but emo ish...i'm thinking the used/funeral for a friend.And jadiny...glad yo...

hey thanks for the comments! this song is about Control in a relationship..this person has had one bad fall in past relationships and is still kind of...

hello there...a good submission....i must agree though about the rhythem..i couldnt seem to get that going but i love the lyrics especially...SO JUST ...

hello there! yes i agree with bluenightangel..its a good song but..its a topic that so many like to write about yet so few succeed in giving you that ...