Hi Silly putty :) I'm glad you liked it, The chorus was great to work with.

Thanks Bob for posting their names, also Thank-you Gina for your input :) glad you liked it. It was fun to write it.take careinkpen :)

Thanks Bob and Jonsi, Changing the lines around made me happy, Thanks Bob. Who came up with the title and chorus? I should have put them in but I wen...

No problem Jonsi, :)I was getting the feeling from your song that she was in control and was doing the taking , him the giving. That's why i went with...

Hi Jonsigreat jobinkpen :)

Hi Ginaenjoyed reading this. you done a really good job with it.take care inkpen :)

Hi JonsiGood song. Here is a suggestion as little as it is :). You push the puttons, make me moan The pleasure got is mine alone - to give is better t...

Hi Matt.Liked reading what you have done but was thinking you could shorten it up alittleI feel smothered by your presence you follow me around Your ...

Hi Pet Nice job. I think the 1st verse could be shorter and still get the message across.I never saw the empty space In your heart, and in your soul I...

Hi christiaan :)good job. One thing i have to say though. In junkyard joe Old ladies said: Joe? He goes to church every day! That's where he was doin...

Hi Rustnvrsleeps :)good song i enjoyed reading it. I agree with bob on the chorus. The last line in the chorus threw me of just for a little until I r...

Hi BobWhat can I say, Nice job on both songstake careinkpen :)

Hi ATB,Really liked the second one you posted but the lineSo I laid down a lick to me don't seem right there. I was thinking maybe something like I do...

Can't see it being a problem :)The freedom exchangetake carelucy :)