Jamir that is one reallyyyyyyy nice piece of writing 8) 8)great job. looking forward to hearing it. :)

Hi Matt, I can't tell you how many times I have come in and looked at this song and never posted. The reason being is I like it alot even though it...

Hi Jamir :)After listening to a couple of your songs, I think it needs very little change.Maybe hereDid he make right all he did wrong toDid he make ...

Thank-you Gina ,I never noticed that :). that is whats so great about these forums, other people see what we don't.Thank-you Jamir, I'm not sure when...

Hi Jamir :)I just downloaded your song and I'm listening to it as I post. You have a very comforting, relaxing voice I love it. Did you do the music...

Thank-you Jamir :)I try to write country, but tend to lean toward folk and ballads. P.S. Glad "himself" is still alive and kicking, does he realized ...

Hi Joe :)Nice job putting it together. Got a couple of comments hope you don't mind.The second and third verse ending rhyme nicely, but the last line...

Thanks Olav and Silly_putty :)I will give it another go and try to tighten it up a little Olav, Silly_putty I never realized that, and besides kids wi...

That's cute I like that ;D ;D

Hi Gina :)good song you have here , I have a suggestion , hope you don't mind.Chorus I don't know where I'm going Don't know what I'll find But thi...

Yes, MJbird I would like to hear you ideas for the music too. Sorry I jumped the gun.Like maxwell said we are here to learn from each other and have f...

Hi Olav I can't really add much more than was already said except to say I really liked these linesWhite clouds for imagination pose Let the waves be ...

I'm new to the site and didn't know it was continuing throughout the lessons. I've already posted the song on soundclick if I should remove it please...

Hi here's my suggestionDon't fret, Tune in, All strings attached@ The reason for all strings instead of no strings attached I was thinking of a guitar...