Well, what direction do you want to go in with it?

Of course "hurt" by NIN is always good....

I think a harsh truth board is something we really need. If soemone posted in there they should expect whatever is given to them. If they are lookin...

I think we're tlaking about slant rhyme ala Dickinson. (At least if I can trust my English classes).

I could probably sit down and write a song right now, but I never seem to be unless I felt inspired when I wrote them.

This is a cool song, very stylized. When I was reading this I was hearing the wah from the second verse of mudvaynes "Nothing to Gein".

Dont worry about it, and my sympathies.

thanks I like your suggestions!

sorry havent posted for awhile. BTW the song is about my fathers death, I probably should have given you guys that information before hand. Its abou...

I figured out what was wrong, it was the headphoens themselves, they were kinda old. Thanks anyway.

thank you so much. I usually am really careful with my equipment so I hadnt had to worry about it before. Thanks again.