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oasisman
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Joined: Jan 29, 2003
Topics: 7 / Replies: 18
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RE: Just written a chorus, what do you think?

Sorry. It's a typo, I was busy at work trying to do two things at once, I'll edit my post.x22020 is an Em6, which is still a good chord by not the one...

18 years ago
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RE: Just written a chorus, what do you think?

Yeah, I've got music for it. I'm thinking of the following:It seems like this forums strips spaces. Each chord is supposed to be struck on the last wo...

18 years ago
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RE: All You Need Is Rock 'n' Roll - Comments Please

Anyone, comments???I've just replaced a lyric in the song because it got replaced with the word 'poop', it now says 'sh!te'.

18 years ago
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RE: What do you think?

I think your assumption of the title is correct, 'I'll Be The One', I can't see what else it could be.In the second verse it would be good to carry th...

18 years ago
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RE: Not Like Me

flyguy,I agree with Alan, it doesn't feel complete as it stands at the moment. Looking good though.Also, what are these 3 lines after the chorus, is i...

18 years ago
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RE: In My Heart

Nice imagery for a start. I don't see much wrong with it except it structure; if this is a poem then that's fine but if they are lyrics then I think i...

18 years ago
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RE: HUGE NEWS!!!

Well done man, hope it all turns out well for you.

18 years ago
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