hey bluenightangel,i have to admit i found this pretty hard work. dont't worry that a good thing, by that i mean i really had to read it and re-read i...

hey gjbrake,agree with the celt, another verse just to flesh it out would be good.i would say this is a good base for a song.i like the second verse (...

the other $7 probably goes to the store that sells the CD

hey sonic,welcome aboard. For 'random songs' your best off posting on the guitar noise song writing club forum, just above this one, ()and if you are...

katreich,liked this as well.how about changing line 3, verse 2 toReads “teach yourself to play”i gets rids of the repetition of the word guitar so...

i liked this as well.. i would maybe change 'adults' to 'grown-ups' just cuz it would be something a child would be more inclined to say

In answer to the long chorus conundrum, in the 8 lines you have two sets of four... perhaps use the first four lines in the first chorus, and then the...

i had a think and can't quite figure how to change it. i think it is clear enough that it can be left as is...perhaps 'seem to haunt your face'... but...

I think marv's idea is good. The only reason i dont think we need a new forum is there is already 'hear here' and the point was just to keep all the ...

The man who sold the world - nirvana (Bowie)Love my Way - Live or Powderfinger (oringally the pyschadelic furs)7 Nation Army - The Flaming Lips (origi...

Jonsi,I really liked this. lots of really good lines. the only bit that felt a bit odd, imo, was 'Shadows from the passing trees are haunting his fa...

just a belated post, to say nice work, scratch. everyones covered everything. i was trying to do something about a light house keeper as well, but go...