well i love all the song titles... when more comes in i'll get ppl to vote one which one they think is the best... now is just "faith" and "girl in gr...

this one is not one of my best so yeah... check out "there is no tomorrow" i think that one has a hook in the chorus or something and its ABAB like so...

there is a lot of imagery in this... i'm guessing is it about a person not wanting to go home and waiting for their love in a train??? :oops: anyways...

"The Tormentor" sounds really good. For this i didnt know wut to write about cuz the topic on SSG was espionage/spy/detective and stuff like that. I...

faith is a good name for the title... originally i was gonna write about a lonely girl but that didnt go far...

ur song reminds me of a book i read several months ago i think called "Wierd on the Outside" which is about a girl who left her father to live with he...

lol pardon my french (pardonez-moi mon francais)...hahha... its an interesting add to ur lyrics... i like ur chorus where theres the echo parts in the...

its AWESOME!!! maybe some rhyming would be good. i think it could be called Behind Closed Eyes

the other lyrics i wrote on my own, i ryhmed every other line and i think that sounds better... for this one it just started rhything every 2 lines so...

well i guess we could work together.... i'm not really good at writing lyrics but i love to write random stuff... dunno about the music of it though.....

its very interesting... it seems like you put a lot of effort into it... theres not as much rhyme as mine but the imagery is definetly strong... keep ...

thnks for ur constructive advice!!! ur version of my lyrics are soo much better... each line is more like a phrase or segment and it sounds nicer... i...

i dont know wut type of music you like but try listening to papa roach scars...its a great song