I had a lot of trouble with this weeks topic. Being 21, I don't have a lot of now and thens yet. And a lot of my memories of childhood, I'd rather keep repressed. So I had to stretch this topic. I decided to make it about my life being free of idiots, for now anyway. If it doesn't fit this weeks topic then I apologize and I would assume it should be moved to the other song board.
Suck me in
Get me addicted
Caught in a web
Of your in securities
I'm removing you
I'm removing you
I'm removing you
I'm removing you
Ridding myself of the parasite
Putting salt on the leech
Having better things to do
Gonna live my life anew
Free of the bullshit
No more of the nonsense
Out of your low
Self esteem trap
I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you
Rid myself of the parasite
Put salt on the leech
Having better things to do
Living my life anew
I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you
I removed myself of you
Never go back to the way it used to be
Being everyone else but me
Now that I'm finally rid of you
I can see the world anew
this is really good, love the chant, love the lines
Never go back to the way it used to be
Being everyone else but me
Now that I'm finally rid of you
I can see the world anew
like doing in those leeches to, very nice
m
sytys
hi one wing
I think this would be a really good loud rock song , plenty of guitar riffs etc
Would like to see the chorus a little more like two lines repeated like
" I'm removing you
I'm removing you "
No more lies from you
No more lies from you
Just a suggestion ( don't be offended by my thoughts though )
Ilove the beginning of this First line really sets the mood for the entire song .
Well done Angel
hilch :?:
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
I can think of at least 5 famous songs that would be so much better with leeches in them ;)
OWA,
Good stuff!
One small suggestion
How about in the first chorus instead of
"I'm removing you"
Trying
"I'll remove myself of you"
Seems to fit better with the other two
Just a thought
John
