Y3week32 pirating your record

hey ya..... been a long road for me this time, got so many half-finished pieces and a lot of lines and stuff that never made it to a song..... wrote some things, tried some lines, tried reworking a song(but couldn't think of something better), now here's the outcome(a tad long, jamir would say, right? :wink: ):

Pirating your record (idealist vs. rationalist)

[watch your imagination and pin down your heart's stem]

A leaf is descending to the soaked ground
-Alas, it's autumn. Of course, the leaves are falling down.
The downpour of the night left its autograph
-Alas, it rained and now the streets are wet.
Flower buds are nodded by the tired breeze
- Alas, the wow-factor of the wind's retiring.

And don't tell me of your innermost feelings
They'd make it in a book of poetry, maybe
But your perception won't impress me
Besides I've already read your diary
Ultimately, the world is just cause and effect you see
Ah, yes I agree
What else could you perceive
With these holes you have for eyes
And these glasses are a rather weak disguise

Look, the posing sun dips the town into warmer shades
Warm shades
There's a transition in the attitude of the human mind
As the outlines of everything blur like desert sand

Really, there's beauty in whatever thing.

Wow, the apples of your eyes must be distorted in one way or another
For that view's one of a kind, but is it worth the fuzz, eah
Your tendency to romanticise screws your cracked sight
Spun in your own web you'll never hear the buzzer
Well, at least I rejoice and take comfort in moonlight
Whereas you will just bear another bother

A leaf is descending to the soaked [it's bloated!] ground
-Alas, it's autumn. Of course, the leaves are falling down.

As for the sunset, it's the most tedious thing and the go you had
On the shades… is almost not worth replying
Anyway, must be voluntary trickery, coz there're experts to describe
Your “marvels” rationally, based on physics and psychology

Ah, yes I agree
What else could you perceive
With these holes you have for eyes
And these glasses are a rather weak disguise

-Your tendency to romanticise screws your cracked sight
Well, at least I rejoice taking comfort in the moonlight
Whereas you will just bear another bother
-oh, you just sounded like my mother,
that's scary, darling
Really, there's beauty in anything.

I guess you're dying for some clarification, right :wink: it's basically a conversation between somebody willing and able to take in the beauty of everything(the black parts) and somebody seeing it more realistic and matter-of-factly(green parts). I had Maximo Park in mind when writing... so i think there could be a way to set it to music(you should see their lyrics, it's amazing how they fit them to music).
okay, hope I didn't annoy you with the length of this post;)

cheers,
bluenightangel

btw... the lines I used(they're from way back, maybe a year old, or older) were:
ah, yes, I agree
what else could you perceive
with these holes you have for eyes
and that's a rather weak disguise