Inspired by Chefie's song Saturday which I haven't critiqued yet.
(Good song Neil I found it inspiring 8) )
Oh and this isn't a broken hearted crying in your beer
love gone wrong song for a change.
Monday Comes MP3 Link
Friday night they're playin' the Blues
Got a brand new pair of dancin' shoes
Time is right to go and have some fun
Saturday you and me together
Sunday pray for lovely weather
But no matter what I do Monday Comes
Monday comes and brings me down
Monday comes with alarm clock sounds
Workin' like a dog to make my pay
Monday comes like a thief in the night
Monday come with it's morning light
I wish that it was any other day
Tuesday dogs are two for one
Down at the local Stop & Run
What you say for lunch we get us some
Wednesday got the hump day Blues
Thursday this week's almost through
Just a few short days 'til Monday Comes
Monday comes and drags me back
Monday comes like a heart attack
That's the way this whole rat race is run
Monday comes like a ton of bricks
Makes me want to call out sick
We could spend the day in bed when Monday Comes
Friday night they're playin' the Blues
Got a brand new pair of dancin' shoes
Time is right to go and have some fun
Saturday you and me together
Sunday pray for lovely weather
But no matter what I do Monday Comes
No Matter what I do Monday Comes...
Have A Happy Monday
John
Hi John,
You're welcome to anything I have. And I like what you've done with those two words. And I love "Monday comes like a heart attack." Makes you want to change every day of the week to Saturday. :lol:
Makes you want to change every day of the week to Saturday. :lol:
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Nice job
Love this :
Thursday this week's almost through
Only a few short days 'til Monday Comes
Makes me wonder about the days in the weeks I reckon they should something like
Monday ------Oh not again day
Tuesday -----Only darn Tuesady
Wednesday- 2 down 2 to go day
Thursday----MMM looking better day
Friday-------Yeah finally day
Saturday---Where is that beer day
Sunday----Funday
Just my opinion
Hilch
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Thanks,
Actually Mondays aren't that bad. It's my wife's bowling night
and that means I get some quality guitar time. It also means
I get to torture all of you with an MP3.
Hope you enjoy Monday Comes Link
And Chefie I'm glad you approve because I stole some of your
concept too. :oops:
John
Very catchy
I like the MP3 GREATLY ......
This is right up in my couple best SSG songs ...
I just adore the ending John , only problem I had with it ....
It reminded me That when week is over ...
Monday comes
Cheers
Trevor
Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am
Hey John,
I love it, you just keep stretching those vocals mate your sounding really good. I dont think there is anything that I would change here, to me this is a well rounded song, well done.
cheers
Paul
Thanks for the comment on the ending Hilch.
I like that part too. It's always fun when you can throw
a little bit of The Blues in.
Paul, Thank you for the encouragement. I'm finally get comfortable
with my limited vocal range and trying to use it to my advantage.
I Think :?
John
You said:
"I'm finally get comfortable with my limited vocal range and trying to use it to my advantage."
It works. Well done, John.
