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 Celt
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Inspired by Chefie's song Saturday which I haven't critiqued yet.

(Good song Neil I found it inspiring 8) )

Oh and this isn't a broken hearted crying in your beer
love gone wrong song for a change.

Monday Comes MP3 Link

Friday night they're playin' the Blues
Got a brand new pair of dancin' shoes
Time is right to go and have some fun
Saturday you and me together
Sunday pray for lovely weather
But no matter what I do Monday Comes

Monday comes and brings me down
Monday comes with alarm clock sounds
Workin' like a dog to make my pay
Monday comes like a thief in the night
Monday come with it's morning light
I wish that it was any other day

Tuesday dogs are two for one
Down at the local Stop & Run
What you say for lunch we get us some
Wednesday got the hump day Blues
Thursday this week's almost through
Just a few short days 'til Monday Comes

Monday comes and drags me back
Monday comes like a heart attack
That's the way this whole rat race is run
Monday comes like a ton of bricks
Makes me want to call out sick
We could spend the day in bed when Monday Comes

Friday night they're playin' the Blues
Got a brand new pair of dancin' shoes
Time is right to go and have some fun
Saturday you and me together
Sunday pray for lovely weather
But no matter what I do Monday Comes

No Matter what I do Monday Comes...

Have A Happy Monday

John

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Hi John,

You're welcome to anything I have. And I like what you've done with those two words. And I love "Monday comes like a heart attack." Makes you want to change every day of the week to Saturday. :lol:


   
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 Celt
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Makes you want to change every day of the week to Saturday. :lol:

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Nice job

Love this :

Thursday this week's almost through
Only a few short days 'til Monday Comes

Makes me wonder about the days in the weeks I reckon they should something like

Monday ------Oh not again day

Tuesday -----Only darn Tuesady

Wednesday- 2 down 2 to go day

Thursday----MMM looking better day

Friday-------Yeah finally day

Saturday---Where is that beer day

Sunday----Funday

Just my opinion

Hilch

Here is to you as good as you are
And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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 Celt
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Thanks,

Actually Mondays aren't that bad. It's my wife's bowling night
and that means I get some quality guitar time. It also means
I get to torture all of you with an MP3.

Hope you enjoy Monday Comes Link

And Chefie I'm glad you approve because I stole some of your
concept too. :oops:

John

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Very catchy

I like the MP3 GREATLY ......

This is right up in my couple best SSG songs ...

I just adore the ending John , only problem I had with it ....

It reminded me That when week is over ...

Monday comes

Cheers

Trevor

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And here is to me as bad as I am
As good as you are and as bad as I am
I'm as good as you are as bad as I am


   
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 pbee
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Hey John,

I love it, you just keep stretching those vocals mate your sounding really good. I dont think there is anything that I would change here, to me this is a well rounded song, well done.

cheers

Paul


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 Celt
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Thanks for the comment on the ending Hilch.
I like that part too. It's always fun when you can throw
a little bit of The Blues in.

Paul, Thank you for the encouragement. I'm finally get comfortable
with my limited vocal range and trying to use it to my advantage.

I Think :?

John

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 Joe
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You said:

"I'm finally get comfortable with my limited vocal range and trying to use it to my advantage."

It works. Well done, John.


   
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