Okay, James,You took the challenge and did an admiral job! Well done!Neil

Hi James,Cute . . . . in a good way. Made me smile. One teeny tiny idea . . . . change your last 5 tequila shots ago to 5 tequila shots to go . . . ...

Hi James,Any thoughts on changing this line:Murdered on the 22nd of January ‘73to Legalized on the 22nd of January ‘73 I think it's a matter of the P...

Hi James,Particularly loved what you've done with the music. Imagery was done without making it seem too morbid. Two things I'm wondering about . ....

Thanks, JMR, and welcome to the Sunday Songwriters Forum!Neil

Thanks John.Neil

Thanks David, Paul, & James for your comments!I always chose the third Great suggestion. DoneRegarding the I've got maybe on my mind verse . ...

Well done! Thanks, James.Neil

Thanks James and John,Been pretty busy this week and not much time to work on rewrites. James: Some very good points and very helpful. John, apprec...

Hi James,nit-pickings Maybe, but they're sure a big help. Thanks!Neil

Hi Vic,This is a song I actually find quite difficult to come to terms with Yeah, it's difficult being a member of this club when you'd rather not . ...

Thanks for the suggestions Hobson. I'm kinda stuck on the statues of stone line for the moment, maybe someone else will chime in and move my stubborn...