Hi Renee,Nice work! A couple of suggestions . . . . Loretta,Things never get better. Shouldn't it beThings never got better? In the last verse, the...

Hi James,I suspect your portfolio of English lessons is becoming quite impressive. It's always fun to imagine the reaction of students to these preci...

Hi James,You bring up an interesting point and you're right. My inclination is to lose the authoritarian voice. I"ll see what I can come up with in ...

Thanks David. Really good suggestions that I will incorporate. I prefer your first option as the second doesn't hold true to the story. I can't bel...

I knew the moment I wrote "teach" that it was out of character. Couldn't get it passed those eagle eyes. Consider it changed! Not quite sure of the...

Wow! Wonderful MP3. Really enjoyed it.Neil

Hi Vic,Nice to have you back! Great topic this week. One question comes to mind . . . .In the first verse you writethe truth haunts my dreams You n...

Hi Paul,Love the lyrics and I actually like that you'll didn't use the title in the verses. My only question would be with regard to the bridge -Some...

I'll keep this minimal . . . . . . nicely done, Paul. Really enjoyed it.Neil

Four, please, kind sir.

Thanks John,Appreciate the feedback.