Very good. I really enjoyed listening to it.

Rarely does a story truly make me laugh. This one did. Not knowing what your band looks like, I used the Blues Brothers as a proxy.

RC - I realize you had a tune for it and my bet is you can make it sound really good. What I meant was was that for me to sing it, (and therein lies t...

I liked the 1st and 2nd verses. I could put a plausible tune to them. I feel lost now with no wayto find relief in the pastthat I'll never see againT...

I have posted the first verse of the song. Why only the first verse?....well, after the whirlwind of getting the recording stuff all setup and learnin...

Quick question - did you intend to turn it from first person to 3rd person in the second verse? I got thrown off by that. The imagery is good.

I would find it very hard to start with the music first, and then add lyrics. There are just way to many things that fly around for it to come out mak...

I broke down this week and am in the process of getting the gear required to record it (that is a whole different endeavor entirely). It will take few...

I keep getting to the last couple of lines in the chorus and want to change the chord structure to break it up a bit. Just my opinion. I am intereste...

Thanks TMarius. To be honest, I do not know if I have ever heard of *Streets of London*. I will go look it up - it may be one of those songs that are ...