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sytys
@sytys
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Joined: Jan 9, 2006
Topics: 20 / Replies: 64
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RE: w36 - centuries song

wow, my favorite, thanks man.

18 years ago
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RE: what are some ways that i can improve my lyrics????

hey russlia, though i'm just learning myseld i try a couple of approaches, first and probably easiest to get a finished song out of (if you can play w...

18 years ago
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RE: w35 - time grows

hey, thanks David, "bittersweet" is a nice description, i felt like i was being sarcastic when i wrote it and ended up changing a lot of lines just to...

18 years ago
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18 years ago
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RE: Found and Lost - SSG 34 with MP3

nice work, wasn't sure about it on the first read but after a listen i really like it, love the lines,If you want to leave here's what you do stop sea...

18 years ago
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RE: Y4week34 lawn needs weeding

nice song, i think it flows well as well, as a note a firefly is a beetle who's belly glows, i believe a will-o-wisp is a small stream of vapour that ...

18 years ago
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RE: w34 - had to go

hey Peter, thanks for the feedback, i've been playin it to C F G C, with a chorus of D A, it's comin along, it's about Cat Stevens, his last song was ...

18 years ago
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18 years ago
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RE: w21 - space time

hey, thanks for all the feedback guys, i enjoyed this week, right from the start i wanted to write about the broader concept of time, took awhile to w...

18 years ago
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18 years ago
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RE: Week 21: Generation.

hey josh, really liked this, especiallyYou may find that generations come and go that your a victim of the tide in this worlds ebb and flow good wri...

18 years ago
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RE: w20 - number two

hey, thanks john, thanks paul, the third verse sort of ran into the fourth, with my lady being pumped about me winning, and giving me some rocking lov...

18 years ago
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RE: w20 - number two

hey hilch, thanks, i was refering to the prize purse you get when you win a race, and where that money was going, the wording is pretty slang.hey celt...

18 years ago
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