hey hilch, i like this, reads with a good beat, one line that threw me wasMy happiness turns to a frown thought maybe you could use, my smile turns i...

hey tokai, great suggestions, i think i'll incorporate all of them, really like the everthing substitution, thanks.m

hey tokai, i think this is a great song, from the first verse you have the hook, off to war, you have a great chorus, bringing home the dead, a good m...

hej morten, i loved denmark when i visited, cool place, i think that your song could definately be longer, but you have a good chorus to work around t...

hey, thanks for the feedback, it's weird, i'm not very religious either, but that's the theme that my songs have taken lately, just interesting subjec...

hey paul, this is another good song, for me it conjures images of the avian flu, liked how you used the french, par avion (by airplane), kinda drums u...

worked out a simple little riff for the song, tried to elaborate but couldn't get anything to work, any suggestions would be helpful.when i wrote this...

this is great writing, really good imagery Whenever they met a tear Leading streams Down my cheeks so good, love to hear itm

finally got around to listen to this and i really like it, very nice flow, great back up vocals, well done.marty s

i like the song, i like the rewrite, and don't your fingers just piss you off sometimes, i worked out the music for my song with a friend, but what he...

hey, thanks for the feedback, that line was my attempt at the present, worded it for the syllable count, and to break out of the rythmn, think i'll ad...

this is really good, love the chant, love the linesNever go back to the way it used to be Being everyone else but me Now that I'm finally rid of you I...