Actually, I was thinking about rewriting the entire song and at least try to make this song make sense. That's gonna be impossible for even me to do. ...

I never looked at it that way, but I guess your right.On a much harsher note: Let's go people, you need to tear this thing to shreds with your comment...

I never looked at it that way, but I guess your right.On a much harsher note: Let's go people, you need to tear this thing to shreds with your comment...

Maybe I did try a little too hard on the rhyme scheming. Oops. That's what I get for being a novice.Oh well! I'll get started fixing the problem just ...

Go ahead and change the title. It's no skin off my back. :) As long as the song is good, and in my personal opinion this is a pretty darn good song.Ni...

Thanks.About the Ireland title, I just decided to use that because I have some Irish blood in me and I couldn't think of anything good.

Absolutely, I have! (Sry if I seem to be mad)But some of the ideas I think just suck. I'm that type of person that needs to do everything perfect. (I ...

Sorry to change the subject!Now I need help with ideas for a song I'm writing called FebruaryAny suggestions for that?(Answers could also use more sug...

Please.More replies!I'm desperate!!!