Okay, the link to my Soundclick profile is in my signature. The mp3 is up, so check it out.

Sorry for the double post. Now that I just did that, sorry for the triple post.

Ya know, these lyrics kind of remind me of Franz Ferdinand's "Michael"... just not as provocative and sexual. It's actually kind of cool that you twis...

Ya know, these lyrics kind of remind me of Franz Ferdinand's "Michael"... just not as provocative and sexual. It's actually kind of cool that you twis...

I'm one of those people that likes to try different styles. Normally, I try to write the music first and then the lyrics, although I sometimes write ...

I edited that verse into the entire song. Tell me anything I need to work on. I know there's something.

Okay, now I have the whole thing down. Tell me what you think.VERSE 1Deep inside it's dark and coldCan't see anythingMiles and miles of endless griefL...

You can't feel bad about what you said, MetalWerk2. It's what I asked for and you gave it to me. Actually, that criticism changed how I write my songs...

Yeah, I just realized how tough it is. However, if I want to achieve my goal to write as many songs as I possibly can before college, I'm going to sta...

You probably didn't notice it, but I just edited the chorus.Yeah, I'm trying to make this song similar to the acoustic songs on their new album. I'm m...

Okay, here's a (very) rough draft right now. Just tell me how I can change up the song so that it makes complete sense.SKINThose crys for help that se...

Well, this song is mostly about a friendship gone bad. It's like a "I'm agitated with you, and I want to get back at you for it" song. Until I write t...