Thank you, beans.That's exactly right. two lives in three words = I love you. end one in five = Sorry, Clark, I Love Lex :D "Sorry, Clark, I love Lex...

Thank you, tavonem. I think they're okay for a fifteen-year-old.Anyone wanna give a shot at interpretting?

not yet, but soon. i'm experiencing some technical difficulties.any favorites?thanks for the comment.

it sounds too much like john denver's "sunshine on my shoulders"

this is a link to the spoken word recording

sweet melody, i appreciate the effort, but it's not at all what i'm looking for. at least not for this song. i agree, i'm not giving u much to work wi...

no problem. great metaphor.

any consideration is much appreciated.

THEY DID IT AGAIN! I WROTE DAM*! DAM**IT!

damn the irony. lol

good song. i like the metaphor. but you seem to switch sides of the glass too abruptly. like here:It's a beautiful day Other side of the glass But I d...

really nice. are you describing australia? sounds a bit like new york. where ever it is, sounds like a sight to visit.favorite line: What a view, the ...

that's downright flattering, man. hehe. ummm, yeah, i do need to sex it up in the name of fob. thanks for the kind words. you've got great ideas. if y...

haha. yeah, you hit it on the nose. it really is just some prose of mine that i saw lyrical potential in, and so i wanted to see if someone could deve...