Personally I like these titles:1. December, spare me your pity2. Half of me is missing; The rest is lonelyAeryn K. McAvan

Thank you slow play....I tried to fit that in there. It actually is a very good line. I changed it around a bit on the verse in the driveway. So I am ...

I enjoyed this. Are you sure this is really your first song? You are a natural born with the gift. Keep up the excellent work! It will all pay off in ...

I love your song. I can relate. It sounds good. I second the change from lostbeginning....

I like your song it has lots of potential. The word "can't" is said a lot. I read it over and over and thought about a few changes that could help you...

That was good and oh so very true. And thats so sad and amazing all at the same time. Its unreal how this world is. Good job!!Aeryn K. McAvan

Thank you Guerilla Charlie......... Im teaching myself guitar lessons at the moment also, so I'll have a completed song hopefully soon. Thank you agai...

Excellent...Excellent...Excellent!!You help my interest through the entire song. I loved it!