great song if you have some music of it I'd love to hear. GREAT JOB.keep jammingArjen

I agree it is a great song but are you sure there isn't a copyright at these lyrics?

great song especially the chorus I like. It has a kind of flow when you read it. I also think the song building is very good the story is very clear.k...

HeeyI must say if it comes to songwriting I really admire Bob Dylan and I've got the same thing as guy d I think I'm only a lot younger 'cause I'm jus...

Bob Dylan, Eric Clapton, BB King, Jimi Hendrix, John Lennon, Bob Marley and uuuuhm much more :D

I just want to say that if you want to write a happy song (and this doesn't only count for happy songs) you have to think about the subject of your so...

When you are willing to write a solo for one of your songs make sure you first write the melody so you know if they'll fit together. So when you've wr...

I like the song. It is very well written. There is only one thing. I allready know a song called 'it takes two'. Try to write songs that are totally n...

maybe you could try to tune it to A whit your capo if you haveThen you getAsus2 Aminor Asus4 Asus2, Aminor, Asus4Then you can try some variations whit...