Hiya Vic. Thanks for the warm welcome back.Yes, I stumbled there. After reviewing the instant reply, we are reversing the call. I think it will read...

Hi Straycat,Well, it definitely has a kalaidescope feel to it - it shifts and it is colorful and you never know where it's going next!This is a great ...

Hi Aliens,OK, good start there. I really like the Burroughs reference. And songs about space travel are ALWAYS awesome in my book.The way you've spo...

Hi all,Thank you very much for the comments. My original vision for the song was a song about a guy who prays for trivial stuff and is upset that he ...

Hi SlowPlayI haven't had a chance to listen to it yet (at work), but the lyrics are good. I agree with the others with the frozen/on fire line.Maybe ...

Hi Jamir,Much better than doughnuts. This one's like an apple fritter, at least :)I love the imagery. It paints a lovely series of pictures in my mi...

Wow...Your song makes me feel lucky.I love the staccato feeling it gives, and the rhythm it suggests is similar to the mayhem conveyed in the song. S...

Very good writing overall. I like the house imagery.Are you going to let us in on which song it is patterned after? I can't figure it out either...d...

Porr,Very cute. I love the line about abusing the right to be stupid. I had a flash of a cop arresting someone and saying:"You have the right to rem...

Jamir,Wow. That is a beautiful piece of poetry there. As is, I hear it spoken with music behind it, but I am having a hard time hearing it sung...it...

Rue,A nice retrospective into why the subject is the way he is. Getting personal is risky, but usually yields great reward. You should be commended ...

As to the length, well... brevity is not exactly my strength. I suspect you & Jamir are in cahoots. Funny you should say that. One of the fir...