Listen to Sammy Hagar sometimes!You'll think you are a genius :D :lol:
Just an idea for the chorus...It's not great, but maybe it will help spark something for you.Who will see her...Who will Hear her...No neighbors, frie...
Hi Izabella,Help me out a little. (I'm an idiot) :? Not sure what you are trying to get across here.Not trying to be rude...I just don't get it.If yo...
How sad (and I mean that in a good way) I really enjoyed the writing.Good job
Good idea CheapThrill!Just keep writing and saving everything. Even if it's only a line or two that come to you.I've got pages and pages of random sen...
Obviously use what you think is the coolest. I just think those words are really overused in music today. You can pick up the anger in the tone of you...
Cool.Just a suggestion, get more specific about who you are talking about...don't keep it so open ended.I'm looking forward to the rest!Greg
Think you have a good start, but it seems incomplete to me.kinda short?Not sure if you're talking about a girl, God, dog?I'd love to see some more mea...
Good stuff!I like the imageryjust a little thought:Enstead of the lineI don't need your darn pity. I got my fist, my rage and that's all I'll ever nee...
You have a lot of anger in the song but I don't really connect to it because you haven't told us why you are so angry.I would have liked to see someth...
Good stuff Flo...I like what you've written, especially the chorus.I think the chorus is the strongest part.Good job!
Wow Flo!You really ran with some ideas there.Good stuff!Mig...just remember, we only offer suggestions out of love...never any egos around here.Hopefu...
Good start Mig!I'd like you to expand it though and tell us what makes Kristy so awesome!her long brown hair you can't get out of your head?her deep b...
Look forward to the edit....I'm sure my boat will float :wink: You might not want to get on it though...it usually floats right over a waterfall :shoc...
like the my dreams come true line better than through.I am a little confused though.You start out with a real physical thang talking about fantasies a...