Hey Dilly,Good ideas....but I was left a little confused.In the first verse you say "are you out there?"which made me think that you are looking for l...

Hey George,Without a chorus or something it just didn't seem to have any meaning to me.I don't really understand what you're trying to convey. I think...

Hey Ken,wow, pretty cool/powerful/sad/thought provoking song.Just a thought in v4v4 So I headed for the coastline I felt her arms around my side For n...

I definately like the idea of starting it one way and ending it the other.very cool.Maybe you could put a little bridge after chorus 1 to say:but time...

I agree.I really like the story, but I couldn't feel it as a song. It keeps coming off more spoken to me.I'd be real interested in hearing this to mus...

Remember that Crash Test Dummies Song where he just hummed through most of it....Whatever that guys name is....I hate him. If there are any other guys...

Good song Nite!I really liked the lineAnd said, thats what mammas do I might be cool to incorporate that into the chorus somehow.Just a thought...I t...

I will definately check out both.Besides the chunk, I am a big fan of the wet chorus/delay sound.I appreciate the feedback!Thanks!

Thanks Arjen...soooo...if you were trying to get closer to the sound of say: Nickelback, Godsmack and Creed, which way would you go?G

very nice....I likey just the way it is.

Noel...Don't take this too harshly (You asked for some feedback) I didn't care for the first verse much.While I like the idea of what you are saying.....

I think you have a good start here...I love the concept of realizing how great creation can be...only it took your death to realize it as you look fro...

Love the little angel verse and the chorus is real nice with "I wonder if the pain was alright" line.It might make it too long but I was left wonderin...

Good flow...really makes you think.Temporary satisfaction could never be worth destroying the family over.Good song Nite.