loved itgot a tip the other day that I now use on all my lyrics and yours seem to qualifytake a blank sheet of paper and go through each line from the...

the wokitokisschlongs in thongs :-)))gunnrunners

try and find your key for singing. this is very strained. keep going

thanks for the comments Barnabus. appreciated.

I find the songs easy ... it's the editing that's hard. simplify, simplify, simplify then repeat as many times as needed. A good jump off point is to ...

lowell george of little feat .. listen to willin by little featjoan armatradingchuck berrytom waits

this might help in your quest for melodies. works well for me"You do not have to leave your room. Remain sitting at your desk or table and listen. Do...

wow one of the best of I've read. short snappy to the point and flowing. Could fit to fast or slow tempo.next step is the melody. got that yet?gram99

for what it's worthlisten to sam stone by john prine. might make a good template for where you could go next but most of all keep it up.

it's a rough start but there's gold in them thar hills. great sense of metaphor.

johni guess i meant soundclick and I love how you a picture of an old car beside the song. I must learn how to do all of that. thanks