HelloThis is very good .. I was concerned with some of the lines but after reading the other posts here it has cleared my questions ...L.K

Hi BnaI like this especially the first verse .. One certainly does pay for memories , which reminds of a story that Hilch tells about his up bringing ...

Hi Pbeethat is truely wonderful I love it I am who I amLovely writting and I always enjoy honest songs that come from the heart and you most definely ...

HiI to felt there were a bit of tongue twisting happening , but then again like The Celt said sung could be totally different CheersL.K

HelloThis a very nice song , very well written ( give yourself a pat on the back ) Well done I agree with Mr Lewis ( would love to hear it )CheersL.K

Hey Hilchone question though .. When did Dylan visit you ? Very nice , very nice Good song to listen to , would like to hear the full version one day ...

Hey Old boyNice writting here mate , one concern for me is the amount of lines that begin with " And "......Towards the end of the song ...So I though...

OH shucks someone missed me I said I would drop in from time to time I won 't leave with out saying good bye ( lol)

ha ha KKilamI'm thinking Green Day sort of music ( when will September end )Just a thoughtI like this 1wing angel well done

Hi mateThere is some nice imagery here , and I agree with David on that little tweek but also there is some more tweeking I feel Hilch , I would like ...

HI Paul I have to agree with what Hilch has said , you are becoming a very fine song writter and your recordings are just wonderful to listen to .Sorr...

Every thing like guitar position and pick angle is personal .. what works for me may not work for youIts all about comfort

Don't be fooled that mucking around with a guitar is practice ..dO like your chords A/G/E/D ... a easy strum pattern like D-u-d-u then change chord a...