Hmmm.. something tells me those lyrics aren't the right ones.This is really embarrassing...Ok, I'll try one more time then"I want someone badly"(K.Wid...

Thanks, margaretHere are the lyrics.Rabbit & FrogV1Who's the one to blame for all the rainasked the rabbit while he shook his furand shaking off t...

Thanks guys :)I was afraid it was a bit on the sticky side, cliches bouncing off the walls and such :PGuess I'm a bit insecure when it comes to loveso...

Thanks Bennett!Chefie helped me a great deal there, I'm really satisfied with it myself.Dustdevil, "I tuck myself in, and lock myself away". would ...

Thanks guys,I've uploaded a version to my soundclick today. David, I was wondering if you could give it a listen and tell me how (or if) you'd like th...

Hi Bennett,Thanks for the kind words about the lyrics. I put out an mp3 on my Soundclick page, it's more of a sketch, seeing as I'm not completely sat...

Hi Dustdevil,I liked this alot, can't put my finger on anything :)When reading, I imagined it sounding like a Counting Crows song or similar. Do you h...

Richard is D*ick Cheney, the VP. Our GN censor changed my post to Richard. That explains a whole lot, I know who he is... didn't think of the censor...

Wait a minute... you callin' me smart? You are, aren't you?!? 8) I had a bit of problems making the 2nd verse fit, but I thought maybe I was too dumb...

Thanks for that link Bennett, great site :DAnd relax, you were correct ;) I've got a somewhat sore throat, but I'll see what I get done with recordin...

Hi morkalg,I liked this alot, the first verse made me think about the breaking up with my ex, and the feeling stayed there throughout the read (though...

Hi Bennett,Good writing here, I like the imagery a lot. I especially like the two last lines of each verse, that really impressed me :)I love metaphor...

hi hilch,Nice writing here, had to go over it a few times to search for the forced rhymes... I'm so into this freeflowstyle thingie, I couldn't see th...

Hi David,Great, great work! I absolutely love the first verse and it all comes together like hand in glove. I hope you get to do that recording, I'm l...