Last seen: Feb 15, 2020
For what its worth, I thought this was sung by a woman to a man. At least that's the way I 'heard' it, so I'd really like to hear you sing it, Jamir....
I would be offended if you liked it and didn't use it. That would have made me feel self centered, egotistical, stuck up, and whatever other redundan...
Lost in the madness of your kiss I'm praying for your love Waiting like the mantis Waiting for the darkness to come I think if she's not with you, yo...
It sounds like a very happy memory, except for the "emotional pain" phrase. I think it either needs to lose that phrase or gain a verse that explains...
Well deserved praise, my friend ;) Â I'm still eagerly and impatiently awaiting those mp3s! (fingers tapping desk, foot tapping floor, teeth grinding ...
It reads perfectly. Brings to mind an old man with a saxophone on the river bank in New Orleans about 2:00 in the morning. I think e would have play...
I like the song as is, but would change "children's" to "kids are" and "kids have" for grammatical reasons. Other than that, can't wait to hear it.J...
Hmmmmmmmmmm. Another line for my "Lines to Work With" file: Reminiscing moments that never met the test of time, (day dreaming, in other words). ...
No, I never got either of the new recordings. Â I'll keep watching Adam's site ( ) for them, or you can try to email them to me again at pegasus1@yepm...
I think I was misread! Desert Tears is beautiful! "For the First Time" and "Even While I'm Sleeping" are just my personal favorites. I still wish yo...
Just a follow up. Thanks to GuitarNoise, I did learn more than I thought I did. A score of 19 or greater would put me in the advanced Music Theory c...
I do think your compromise works, but the "past" part is one of those grammatical things that is going to bug me every time I hear it, as Merriam-Webs...
I like the song, but the redundancy of "reminiscing the past" bothers me. I would just draw out the "reminiscing", making it fill the whole measure, ...
I must say I'm a bit puzzled by that one myself. No, I can't say that I have ever worn makeup, except a bit of stage makeup from time to time, and ca...
No, what you have done is fine. I think MJ was just thinking that might just bring the whole song full circle. I'd love to hear what kind of melody M...