Hi GuyInSummersnice song I think you did a good job i realy enjoyed listening to this nice vocals as wellMystic

this is good lots of story nice lyricsMystic

not a bad start for the first writing of this song, Trevor has a good point and it would be quite fitting for the songlook into my eyes watch as my so...

thanks for the feed backI am actually working on a rewrite @ this time, hopefully it wont take to long but i seem to be stuck for now :wink: Mystic

hi barnabuswell i was writting this i could totaly picture a guy singing this about a girlthought that it would be humouris thanks for your comment on...

Reincarnatethanks for the comment And sit with me, oh we could talk about history Remember Benny, how he flew the kite next thing you know we got the ...

hi lwj001thanks for your input I think I will put some more thought to these lyricsbut Keep the same song structur cause i would like it to be a clas...

LOL... :lol: .. thats great barnabusnow iI think your feeling it........LOL :lol: :wink: Mystic

Hi Barnabus :D I listened to the new version with neil singing i think its starting to go somwear, but still in my opinion i think it needs to be a l...

I like your lyrics this has good potential needs a bit of tweeking threw out the songbut i also felt that the ending could maybe use a bit more thoug...

I'm not much for country but I like your lyrics it read quit well the only thing that threw me of was this line The cowboy crossed the darkened valley...