I see your new, so welcome to guitarnoise!I really liked this song. It had some great feelings behind it. Not much I can say to make changes. Keep pos...

I was also thinking of changing the name of the song to something less specific. Any ideas?

Hey footinthegrave, I can relate to your problem. I got writers block recently. Write about stuff you've gone through, not just about the stuff you ar...

I really liked both of them. The first one was my favorite. It had lots of imagery and it stood out.Yes, with you sleeping it'll be easy To pretend I ...

Awesome. As BN said, it is very unique and has lots of very good lines (all of the ones BN quoted were my favorites.)Keep it up!

Thanks for your post. Yeah that one is my favorite lie too.

that none of the roads led to Rome. I'd travelled plenty enough of them And none had brought me home. That is a very, very great and true line. Great ...

That's great stuff. I loved the chorus! Ditto about keeping the 50's, 60's thing going on. Keep it up!I love the Buttercup song! :D And I do remember...

I can see that. Yeah, dropping the "I"s does make it flow better, and it gives it more character (in a distorted type of way.) Thanks for the advise.

I thought it was great and well written. I liked the two different feelings because whoever may be listening to the song could relate to it more. Keep...

Well the last verse is just explaining how it was my fault that I lost something I loved and how I will make it my duty to protect from now on. I know...

I liked this one a bunch. Seemed to me the song was about wanting to just play your music and not sellout (like many musicians do.) I have a HUGE resp...