I double-dog-dare anyone who writes a song about pokemon or magic cards. lol
Martin-6:"I know I'm not alone."I was just trying to say that I'm not the only one who has ever questioned about the afterlife, heaven, or whatever. M...
Your five cents worth is actually a really good idea. It would have the song tell more of a story. Thanks, I think I'll change it.
I thought the second version of the song was a great step up from the first. Words weren't over-used and, all-in-all, it just sounded way better. The ...
I thought the song was good. Disturbing and dark. I especially liked this verse: The gun is to my head And all I do Is laugh Empty shatters my realm I...
Merry Christmas and a happy new year to you too!
Hey rodders, thanks for posting and giving your opinion.I think I can work with that line, John. I was thinking of something like:And the rest can hel...
I don't know why you would even consider it bad. I guess you are your hardest cridic.I liked it. Some pretty positive stuff, seemed like you were happ...
Good song. I loved the imagery and your choice of words. It's been three daysAnd I may not make it to four. Great line. As for the ending, I liked it....
I would have to agree with mike on the lines that don't seem to flow well. Lots of the lines had some great imagery and thoughts behind them, especial...
Yes I did, actually. Thanks for the correction.Also, I was thinking of changing the name, but since you guys seem to like it I guess I'll keep it. But...