A chorus without lyrics, that would be quite original :DI think this is supposed to be the chorus:"and how I wish, I could be there next to you how I ...
I love it! I like how you can take any subject and write lyrics about it. The meaning is obvious, there's a bit of humour and there's something to thi...
Reminds me of Bob Dylan's "Hurricane". There's just enough stuff for a good two-and-a-half minute song, but it just goes on and on and on, repeating t...
sorry just spotted the flats in the clef.the melody is therefore F G Ab Bb Ab G F F F E F Galso should the E be an E#??????? More likely: Eb The sc...
Like a normal Em, add the D note on the second string, don't strum the bottom E.x22030Seems the most simple solution to me.
There's nothing specific that stood out. A fairly standard use of imagery, and quite a bit of repetition, but that's OK if the music and the melody is...
I can't comment on how catchy the riff is, as I'm at work and I don't carry a guitar with me, so I can't try it out. Also, I'm sure my co-workers woul...
This is a tough question, because what worked for me, might not work for some one else, and vice versa.First of all, something about me; I play the gu...
So your key is C minor. You're using the harmonic minor scale, with a raised third (and a borrowed harmony to go with it) in the beginning of the pie...
I don't know why it should be confusing ("ii-iii-iv in the scale of F with a tonal center of D" is confusing) - the progression provides you with a cl...
Yep, it'd be i-iv-v... Gm - Am - Dm is i-iv-v? That's not correct, is it? If it is, please explain.I'd say it's ii-iii-iv in the scale of F with a t...
I disagree with the previous poster. I think the lyrics are original enough, and I don't think there's really much change needed. I like the flow, the...
You sure have some quality lines and some nice imagery here. I especially like the first part:"Can you feel it flowing through your veins? In the air,...
I like it. It's good. Simple, but good. The only line that I didn't like was:"If looks could kill You would surely fit the bill"I always thought that ...