Thanks AllOK I have too get off my butt and get things set up so I can record again. My music room is in a bit of disarray but maybe this weekend.Joh...

James,I would like to tear the song down and point out all the problemsbut I can't find any. Excellent.I like the way you contrast the dark side of LA...

Renee,You are absolutely correct about the repetitive " I want". I will edited to improve on that.I'll have to disagree with the "Dom Perignon" I see ...

James,I had a little trouble understanding how you intended the two uses of "second hand". On a second listen it all came clear. The opening line is a...

Thanks James,Spent was a typo. Duly noted and changed.I enjoyed the video.John

Renee,Nice Job!I've seen those type pictures. The only thought I had wasmaybe have Mom smiling at the same picture.It could be as simple as Smiling at...

I like it!Always a favorite of mine The tempo seemed OK to me as I played and the "smokey bar" vocals wordwell. Need a little more time on the mandoli...

Scratch,I like your basic idea. It's reminds me of Suzanne Vega's "Tom's Diner".As James mentioned it just needs some fleshing out. I like the Chorus...

Thanks for the comments.John

James,Like David said "Both arrangements are very cool."There seems to be a close similarity to Johnny Cash's "I Walk The Line"in the first 3 line of ...

Hey Scratch,Welcome Back. My participation around here has been sporadic at best the last couple yearsbut I'm trying to get back into it. Week 41 mark...

More Details:Mike a man in his mid to late 60's is rummaging through his attic on a beautiful spring Saturday. It's the perfect day for this chore. Th...