Hi'a alac05Not sure if this was for a SSG assignment or not !!! been away for a sabatical, but thought I should give it a read anyway.I love these lin...

Hi'a Celt,Love the guitaring, it fits the lovely lyrics so well, a bit dissapointed not to be hearing an irish accent ( considering your nick) but th...

Hi'a Karla,Really great job ( thinks for the translation ) I think this would be great to record as it would have so much appeal for so many, I love t...

Hi'a Joe,Grand reading,I do agree the verse AND I'VE FOUND THAT DWELLING ON IF ONLY IS NON-PRODUCTIVE AND WOULDN'T ALLOW ME TO LIVE NO, ALL IT'S TELLI...

Hi'a Guitargeek,Well you have a good story line here, but I am having a problem with the meter, I have put the numbers in brackets beside the lines I'...

Hi'a Blue,Good reading, and I love the simplicity, you've come a long way girl !!!!!Go wellJa'mir

Hi'a SlowplayOne line kept popping out at meYou're frozen, light me on fire This just didn't fit to me !!!!!!!!!!!!! not the meter but the actual word...

Hi'a Vic,Nice simple heartfelt lyrics, but I think a song that has to be heard rather than read to get the full impact... let me know when you have a ...

This is now re witten ,recorded and posted here .... comments always appreciated.The recording could be better but with just a laptop mic for my voice...

Hi'a Bob, Welcome to the forum, I think your lyrics have a good take on this weeks assignment, your meter is good and rhyming patterns well thought ou...

sorry this entered twice and I don't know how to erase the posting only edit :cry:

THE FEATHERA fluttering feather in the breeze that gently landed at your feet You stopped and stared and wondered where …………….I'd come from ...

I thought I was the only one left on this forum from that era, you've made my day Vic,

Ta ever so, have taken notes and will give it a tryJa'mir