Haha wow, you got carried away.Not bad though, I like the commotion from the start, fixes up things a bit.

Hey,Thanks for all the comments :)I agree with you on most of your points james, I do however think the music helps for some of them. Have in mind a s...

Hmm yours may be working a bit better actually, still fits what I had in mind. I wasn't completely sure of the verses myself. (This is the problem wit...

Thanks for the great comments all! :DNot really sure if it fits the usual blues formula. I put in suggested chords, feel free to change them.

Woo recordings!!Uploaded one for this song plus another one I've been working on (with the following lyrics)When will youWhen will you see meWhen wil...

Hey,Thanks straycat!! Really great comment there. Your misunderstanding is actually quite a funny one, I'm gonna have to revisit this one and see if I...

Hey,Nice looking choruses. From the recordings your voice is great too! Kudos.Not much feedback to give yet, we'll see how these develop next week. :...

Hey,Thanks Pbee, good suggestion. I was actually wondering how to connect it together a bit more, so that could work.

Hey,Thanks James :)This song looks so much better than it did at 2am, how strange.Hmm, the last line might have been a bit much too soon then haha, I ...

Very, very solid lyrics. Maybe it's the anthem-esque feel to them, but definitely getting that patriotic vibe.Great core morals in this one too, with ...

Haha, wow. That's intense. I'm not entirely sure how that would be sung, but you'd have to have fairly big lungs ;)(I included the brackets when I rea...