gmilam and Dilly dally, thanks for the comments and words of encouragement.Take care Nite.......

Hi, It seems your getting this lyric together pretty good. My problem is with the chorus. It feels as if your saying the same thing twice.Also when yo...

Thanks Alan and Gilam. I appreaceate it. Nite.......

Thanks for the input everyone,I coudnt think of how to put in the reason hes in a wheelchair. without pretty much changing the whole song. But then ag...

Hi Vic, Been to Texas a few times myself and wouldnt mind being there now. We just got a foot of snow. Any way real cool song, Liked from beginning to...

Hi gmilam, First off all my lyrics have a different melody. But I do write a lot in the same pattern. verse verse Chorus verse verse bridge chorus. Or...

Hi Snoogans,Glad to see your back around. I'm glad you liked the song . But I,m still stuck on a title. Thanks. Ken.............

Hi, Idont think you would have a problem with the red sky at all.Dylons has long been forgotten by most. Plus ther are alot of songs with the same tit...

Thanks Musi Glad you liked it. Nite.................

Thanks Spage,glad you liked the song.Take Care. Nite................