Hi Vic, Nice to hear from you also. Iv,e been stuck in some kinda writers block latley. Thats why I have'nt posted much. If I try to force any writing...

Hi Vic, Cool song You coudnt have said it better. On a subject most ignore. Good writing. Ken...

Thanks Cheap Thrill, Glad you liked it. These are the hardest songs for me to write. Because you have to go from young to old and make it make sense. ...

Sorry man ,But you lost me. Keep trying but make it so people can remotley understand what your saying. Take care Nite..........

Good song again and like the others dust on dust for a title It sounds interesting and origanal. Take care. Nite..............

Excellant write I like it alot.Keep up the good work. Nite..........

The only thing I would do is use sink or swim more in the song.Its a great hook. Otherwise I like the song alot. Take care Nite...............

Hi Dilly Dally, Sure go ahead and put some music to the song.if anything happens and the song takes off we split fifty fifty.as cowriters. And one mor...

Looks like you fixed the verse.Yeah the altogether makes no sence to me.Take care Nite........................

Hi Dilly,First off this is more like a rant than a song. When I first started writing I had trouble with song structure to. But with the help of peopl...

hi Jonsi, I just have A few suggestions. first For some reason the 3rd verse was a little confusing. I know what it means but I think you should rewor...