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Joined: Apr 12, 2005
Last seen: Apr 9, 2022
Topics: 164 / Replies: 1932
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Re: Log me on automatically each visit - not working ?

Thanks for the reply guys. It seems that if I use an original link I set up on my desktop then I have the issue. So I've deleted that one and created ...

9 years ago
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Re: Y12 W15-First time submitting

Hi wilcoman,yes welcome to SSG. For me the this phrase " He’s thinking about ending time" has always felt like he's thinking about his own mortality ...

9 years ago
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Re: Y12W15 - The Good Ship

Hi NeilI like this a lot :D . My only comment would be this line but now I’ve a most difficult thing to say for me it feels just a little pedestrian....

9 years ago
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Re: Y12W15 - School Daze

Hi Neil,yep good read :D the rhythm is quite easy to follow. I have to admit that when I read "teach" I stopped and though hmm interesting word to us...

9 years ago
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Re: Y12 W15.....Thirst For Knowledge

Hi Vic,I like the philosophical direction you've taken this. I especially like the chorus, the last line is perfect :D . Well you can lead a horse to ...

9 years ago
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Re: SSG12 - Week14 - Dancing with Ghosts - mp3 added

Thanks guys for the listen and comments.Roy, I've been reading Keith Richards book and in there he talked about one song they did ("Roll Over Beethove...

9 years ago
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Re: Week 15 Who Knew ( Very Rough Draft )

Hi Trev,I'm liking this :D. I think this is a big step forward in your songwriting, well done. Its got good structure, tells a story and delivers you...

9 years ago
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Re: Year 12 - Week 14 - Dances with Ghosts - Take-2

Hi Roy,well done you writing two songs for the weeks assignment :D. My only comment would be that it might be nice to allude to why she hung around.c...

9 years ago
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Re: Year 12 - Week 14 - Dances With Ghosts

Different thread would be best I think.Paul

9 years ago
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Re: SSG Year 12 Week 14

Hi David,but still keep it more from Maria's viewpoint absolutely, for my money something like this might work:so this: Although Maria’s world is suc...

9 years ago
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Re: SSG12 - Week14 - Dancing with Ghosts - mp3 added

Its called a "Mitello" and its had a fair old beating throughout its life, on the back is got old stickers and someone carved the school it used to be...

9 years ago
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Re: SSG12 - Week14 - Dancing with Ghosts - mp3 added

Thanks James and David Nice to see you put your reggae groove to wonderful use yes I'm really enjoying my old $15 beater guitar at the moment, I think...

9 years ago
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