Thanks for the reply guys. It seems that if I use an original link I set up on my desktop then I have the issue. So I've deleted that one and created ...

Hi wilcoman,yes welcome to SSG. For me the this phrase " He’s thinking about ending time" has always felt like he's thinking about his own mortality ...

Hi NeilI like this a lot :D . My only comment would be this line but now I’ve a most difficult thing to say for me it feels just a little pedestrian....

Hi Neil,yep good read :D the rhythm is quite easy to follow. I have to admit that when I read "teach" I stopped and though hmm interesting word to us...

Hi Vic,I like the philosophical direction you've taken this. I especially like the chorus, the last line is perfect :D . Well you can lead a horse to ...

Thanks guys for the listen and comments.Roy, I've been reading Keith Richards book and in there he talked about one song they did ("Roll Over Beethove...

Hi Trev,I'm liking this :D. I think this is a big step forward in your songwriting, well done. Its got good structure, tells a story and delivers you...

Hi Roy,well done you writing two songs for the weeks assignment :D. My only comment would be that it might be nice to allude to why she hung around.c...

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Different thread would be best I think.Paul

Hi David,but still keep it more from Maria's viewpoint absolutely, for my money something like this might work:so this: Although Maria’s world is suc...

Its called a "Mitello" and its had a fair old beating throughout its life, on the back is got old stickers and someone carved the school it used to be...

Thanks James and David Nice to see you put your reggae groove to wonderful use yes I'm really enjoying my old $15 beater guitar at the moment, I think...

Thanks Neil :D