Wow, there have been a lot of songs about marriage lately. I'll just chip in that the line "What's going on" has been used before prominently so a lis...

The song sounds great. My comment is that the rhythm of the line:"This time we're following our hearts"It sounds a little forced. Maybe it's come acro...

I also think this song is pretty good, but it's tough to write out lyrics that are supposed to come across as improvisational. I would add in the note...

I think I'll take both of your suggestions. Barnabas I agree that "and" goes better. Vic, you're right that brain isn't quite right. Maybe too technic...

I'll do the open spot.

I've never done one of these online jams before, but I'll give it a try if there's still a spot open

I believe that The Thrill is Gone by BB King is in Am

Why do you want to play guitar just to learn exercises? I can't believe that your goal is, "to be able to play fast and solo in any key... and of cour...

Well I'll start off with something that stands out pretty obviously and that's the broken rhyme scheme in these lines:Celebrations and happy timesAre ...

Thanks everyone for your kind comments. I myself agree with your comments that the original song is better, but I'm pretty proud of the second song to...

I think you should call it the "Talkin Fine Fancy Clothes Blues." Maybe there could be something instead of the phrase "international joke." I can't e...

I really enjoyed listening to the song. Just a thought, when you hold out the word dream, is it always the same note? It seems like it might be, but i...

Here's a recording of the new version with a totally different tune and feel.

This is really a whole new song, but I wanted to give a try at changing to the third person and setting up a different rhyme scheme. Let me know what ...