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Joined: Nov 22, 2009
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Re: Y9W23 Dragon Guitar

You have such a gift for words Wilhelmina! Good for you for putting some vocals to this one, it makes such a difference to hear the melody with the ly...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W24 Magic

Your imagination knows no bounds, does it? :) This is very nicely written. What a great idea and where you took it, I really liked the little story a...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W16 Willa revised

Very nice job on reorganizing this lyric! Totally looks like a song now and a nice one at that. The only thing I would suggest would be maybe to put a...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9 W13 ~ What A Life! (yes, I'm way behind)

Thanks for giving this a read James, much appreciated.Sorry about the name of the street, that is just too coincidental! LOL I meant to Google that na...

12 years ago
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Re: Week 16

This is well written, I think it tells the story in an interesting manner and I enjoyed reading it very much! I'm not so sure it would have the same e...

12 years ago
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Re: SSG Year 9 - Week 16

This paints a very nice picture of life back then. :) That is half the battle! Except for the references to fishing, this displays a nice scene of my ...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W16 Breakin' In

Pen-striped suit! LOL That's a good one! :lol: :lol: :lol: I don't think it gets much better than that, but the new shoes following it is a little ...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W16 Breakin' In

The bars on the clothes line made me shake my head a little too at first until I understood what you probably meant. That was the only line though, an...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9 W16 (WIP)

What a great start! I hope you continue on with it, this could be good. You stated a couple of ideas about where you may want to go with it. I 'vote' ...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W16 Breakin' In

LOL, I think maybe some people could feel the same way in this day and age!The music and melody seem to fit very well for something from way back then...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W13 Good Luck, Bad Luck

I have read this story somewhere before or something similar, great idea to put the sentiments into a song! It is a very meaningful story.The words an...

12 years ago
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Re: Y9W12 Living in a Box with MP3

Interesting lyric. I concur with dhodge's idea about providing some variation. It is quite a long song, a fair number of verses, so it becomes rather ...

12 years ago
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Re: 9-12 This House of Broken Dreams [p Added Sound File

Great idea...this is one of those that I read thinking, 'now why didn't I think of that'! I liked the structure and simplicity of this, the point gets...

12 years ago
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