You have such a gift for words Wilhelmina! Good for you for putting some vocals to this one, it makes such a difference to hear the melody with the ly...

Your imagination knows no bounds, does it? :) This is very nicely written. What a great idea and where you took it, I really liked the little story a...

Very nice job on reorganizing this lyric! Totally looks like a song now and a nice one at that. The only thing I would suggest would be maybe to put a...

Thanks for giving this a read James, much appreciated.Sorry about the name of the street, that is just too coincidental! LOL I meant to Google that na...

This is well written, I think it tells the story in an interesting manner and I enjoyed reading it very much! I'm not so sure it would have the same e...

This paints a very nice picture of life back then. :) That is half the battle! Except for the references to fishing, this displays a nice scene of my ...

Pen-striped suit! LOL That's a good one! :lol: :lol: :lol: I don't think it gets much better than that, but the new shoes following it is a little ...

The bars on the clothes line made me shake my head a little too at first until I understood what you probably meant. That was the only line though, an...

What a great start! I hope you continue on with it, this could be good. You stated a couple of ideas about where you may want to go with it. I 'vote' ...

LOL, I think maybe some people could feel the same way in this day and age!The music and melody seem to fit very well for something from way back then...

I have read this story somewhere before or something similar, great idea to put the sentiments into a song! It is a very meaningful story.The words an...

Interesting lyric. I concur with dhodge's idea about providing some variation. It is quite a long song, a fair number of verses, so it becomes rather ...

Great idea...this is one of those that I read thinking, 'now why didn't I think of that'! I liked the structure and simplicity of this, the point gets...